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Miryam Posted 21 years ago
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Urgent !! can anybody check my small paragraph? plz

We (Arab) have lots of Petrol, but unfortunately we didn't profiteer this gift well. We send it to the foreigners with expensive prices, and then we squander the incomings in many things that don't help our country to improve. However in western countries they use the petrol and the money in producing many things and then resend it to Arabic countries with expensive prices. In both ways they are the winners. The biggest problem in the Arabic world is that our countries are consumer, not manufacturer. We have lots of money to produce and excellent minds to work, but who appreciate?

Western is producing airplanes and missiles, whereas Arab still talking about the past and how they were when the entire world came to them to study their different sciences.
  

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Hi Miryam. I think you mean oil rather than petrol. Oil is the raw black stuff, petrol (fuel for vehicles) is just one of the things made from it.

  • Hi Miryam.
  • I think you mean oil rather than petrol.
  • Oil is the raw black stuff, petrol (fuel for vehicles) is just one of the things made from it.
  • Nothing is made from petrol.
  • We have lots of oil but unfortunately we do not use this gift well.
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Hi Miryam.

I think you mean oil rather than petrol. Oil is the raw black stuff, petrol (fuel for vehicles) is just one of the things made from it. Nothing is made from petrol.

We have lots of oil but unfortunately we do not use this gift well. We send it abroad (not sure whether you mean you charge a high price for the petrol or whether the foreigners have countries with high pr

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