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Hasibrahman Posted 4 years ago
Grammar

Upon getting his Lungi pulled....

Do you find this sentence grammatically correct and natural enough?


? Upon getting his Lungi pulled (when his Lungi got pulled by a woman) , I think it(that Lungi) came undone and his private parts got exposed/flashed.



Lungi: https://www.wikihow.com/Wear-a-Lungi?utm_source=wikihow&utm_medium=article&utm_campaign=amp#


P.S. I used those sentences in brackets to clearly provide my messages.

  

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S. I used those sentences in brackets to clearly provide my messages. " There are several problems.

  • S.
  • I used those sentences in brackets to clearly provide my messages.
  • " There are several problems.
  • The mechanical ones are that "lunghi" should not be capitalized, and there has to be comma after "undone".
  • The bigger problem is one of sense.
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HasibrahmanP.S. I used those sentences in brackets to clearly provide my messages.

So the actual sentence is "Upon getting his Lungi pulled, I think it came undone and his private parts got exposed/flashed."

There are several problems. The mechanical ones are that "lunghi" should not be capitalized, and there has to be comma after "undone". The bigger

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