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Dear Travel Partner,
First of all, we would like to express our sincere gratitude for your interest and support to Bali Suci Tours & Travel.
In anticipate the low season and generate more business in the up coming season.
With great pleasure we are pleased to update our CAMPAIGN HOTEL RATE & BALI SIGHTSEEING TOUR, immediate effect through December 2004.
To make comfortable to all of the Clients joining our Full Day Sightseeing Tour, will be provided free complimentary Lunch at Local Restaurant, as well with Spanish Speaking Guide and one bottle mineral water, Private AC Car. Airport transfer will be provided Face Towel on arrival.
Please kindly open our Special Campaign Rate as attach file
Hopefully with the rate offered will be benefit to your company and your valuable Clients.
Meantime if there is anything we can do to assist, please don't hesitate to contact us
Once again, Thank you very much for your continues support and good cooperation
We are looking forward to serving and welcoming your valuable Clients to Bali
Happy Selling !!!!!!!
With best regards,
Dear Travel Partner,
First of all, we would like to express our sincere gratitude for your interest and support to Bali Suci Tours & Travel.
In anticipate the low season and generate more business in the up coming season.
With great pleasure we are pleased to update our CAMPAIGN HOTEL RATE & BALI SIGHTSEEING TOUR, immediate effect through December 2004.
To make comfortable to all of the Clients joining our Full Day Sightseeing Tour, will be provided free complimentary Lunch at Local Restaurant, as well with Spanish Speaking Guide and one bottle mineral water, Private AC Car. Airport transfer will be provided Face Towel on arrival.
Please kindly open our Special Campaign Rate as attach file
Hopefully with the rate offered will be benefit to your company and your valuable Clients.
Meantime if there is anything we can do to assist, please don't hesitate to contact us
Once again, Thank you very much for your continues support and good cooperation
We are looking forward to serving and welcoming your valuable Clients to Bali
Happy Selling !!!!!!!
With best regards,
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This is the way I might write it: "Dear Travel Partner, First of all, we would like to express our sincere gratitude for your interest in and support for Bali Suci Tours & Travel. In anticipation of the slow season and to generate more business in the upcoming season, we are pleased to update our CAMPAIGN HOTEL RATE & BALI SIGHTSEEING TOUR, effective immediately through December 2004. To make all of the clients joining our Full Day Sightseeing Tour comfortable, a complimentary lunch at a local restaurant will be provided, and a private air-conditioned car, as well as a Spanish-speaking guide and one bottle of mineral water.
- This is the way I might write it: "Dear Travel Partner, First of all, we would like to express our sincere gratitude for your interest in and support for Bali Suci Tours & Travel.
- In anticipation of the slow season and to generate more business in the upcoming season, we are pleased to update our CAMPAIGN HOTEL RATE & BALI SIGHTSEEING TOUR, effective immediately through December 2004.
- To make all of the clients joining our Full Day Sightseeing Tour comfortable, a complimentary lunch at a local restaurant will be provided, and a private air-conditioned car, as well as a Spanish-speaking guide and one bottle of mineral water.
- Airport transfer will include a refreshing face towel provided on arrival.
- Please open the attached file for our Special Campaign Rates.
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This is the way I might write it:
"Dear Travel Partner,
First of all, we would like to express our sincere gratitude for your interest in and support for Bali Suci Tours & Travel.
In anticipation of the slow season and to generate more business in the upcoming season, we are pleased to update our CAMPAIGN HOTEL RATE & BALI SIGHTSEEING TOUR, effective immediately throu
"Dear Travel Partner,
First of all, we would like to express our sincere gratitude for your interest in and support for Bali Suci Tours & Travel.
In anticipation of the slow season and to generate more business in the upcoming season, we are pleased to update our CAMPAIGN HOTEL RATE & BALI SIGHTSEEING TOUR, effective immediately throu
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