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Dewa Artanadi Posted 22 years ago
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Dear Travel Partner,

First of all, we would like to express our sincere gratitude for your interest and support to Bali Suci Tours & Travel.

In anticipate the low season and generate more business in the up coming season.
With great pleasure we are pleased to update our CAMPAIGN HOTEL RATE & BALI SIGHTSEEING TOUR, immediate effect through December 2004.

To make comfortable to all of the Clients joining our Full Day Sightseeing Tour, will be provided free complimentary Lunch at Local Restaurant, as well with Spanish Speaking Guide and one bottle mineral water, Private AC Car. Airport transfer will be provided Face Towel on arrival.

Please kindly open our Special Campaign Rate as attach file

Hopefully with the rate offered will be benefit to your company and your valuable Clients.
Meantime if there is anything we can do to assist, please don't hesitate to contact us

Once again, Thank you very much for your continues support and good cooperation
We are looking forward to serving and welcoming your valuable Clients to Bali

Happy Selling !!!!!!!
  

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Please don't double-post, Dewa. It is irritating. I just revised this on your other thread.

  • Please don't double-post, Dewa.
  • It is irritating.
  • I just revised this on your other thread.
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Please don't double-post, Dewa. It is irritating. I just revised this on your other thread.

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