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Alesha2008 Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

UPDATE>>ASAP!!!! NEED HELP

Hi.
Thanks for taking time out of your precious day to read this.
At the moment i am studying A-Level ICT and i need a end-user for my coursework. This requires me to write a letter to a company asking for permission to use their current system and also asking to have time with them to do an interview so far this is all i have.....ANY MORE IDEAS???

Dear Sir/Madam





My name is **** *** and I am asking for a minute of your time to read this short letter.



I currently attend sixth form college and I am taking a course in A-level ICT in my second year. The new requirements of the examination board ask that I find a real end-user for my coursework.



I am asking if I can use your company as an example for my coursework.



The coursework consists of:

  • Investigating the current system used and establishing what is needed for a new system.

  • Clear requirements from the user (in this case you)

  • Interview the company employees or manager to ask any questions about the current system used.

  • Receiving letters as evidence

  • Designing a computerized system for the company (if you do not use it)




If you are willing to taking part in this situation, it would be grateful if you can write a letter stating:

  • Details of the business,

  • The business’ purposes,

  • Processing information,

  • Some of the problems encountered with, and

  • Some detail as to how you are going to solve it.


I have enclosed a stamped addresses envelope so that it is easier to send a letter.



If you do not wish to take part in the wonderful experience, please could you write a brief letter explaining why and send it back to me in the stamped address envelope that came with this letter.





Thank you for you time in reading this and I hope to hear from you soon.





Your Sincerely





<my name>

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Hi Alesha, Welcome to the Forum. You haven't described what 'ICT' is. I think it relates to the study of information systems in organizations, although I'm not sure if it would only concentrate on computer-based information systems.

  • Hi Alesha, Welcome to the Forum.
  • You haven't described what 'ICT' is.
  • I think it relates to the study of information systems in organizations, although I'm not sure if it would only concentrate on computer-based information systems.
  • I have written a few comments, pretending that I am the President of the company that you are writing to.
  • I think you need to revise what you have written, and perhaps repost.
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Hi Alesha,

Welcome to the Forum.

You haven't described what 'ICT' is. I think it relates to the study of information systems in organizations, although I'm not sure if it would only concentrate on computer-based information systems.

I have written a few comments, pretending that I am the President of the company that you are writing to.

I think you need to revis

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