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Irfan Handeputra Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

"Updated News on Inspiring Today's Sensation" Correct or Not?

Dear good people,

In this opportunity, I'd like to confirm whether this tagline is grammatically correct or not

"Updated News On Inspiring Today's Sensation"

And if not, can you tell me the best structure for it?

Thanks
  

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It will serve as a tagline to an online news website...

I find the meaning confusing for "updated news on inspiring today's sensation" sounds like "updated news about how to inspire today's sensation", when it should actually mean "updated news that inspires today's sensation"

Therefore, I believe that it would be better to put it like "updated news, inspiring today's sensation"
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I can live with "dude"—just don't call me "babe".

We're getting there. I'm sorry, but I still don't know what you mean by "sensation".

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