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Liveinjapan Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Update

We updated the sofware ABC.
Updated content is as follows:
  • Transaction speed has improved
  • Highly integrated design 
  • .... 
...

In my sentences, is the bold part correct?

Is the verb 'is' correct in this case?

Shoud I say just 'Change' or 'Changes' for 'Updated content is as follows:'

Thanks
  

Top answer

Hi, We updated the sofware ABC. Updated content is as follows: Transaction speed has improved Highly integrated design .... In my sentences, is the bold part correct?

— Clive

  • Hi, We updated the sofware ABC.
  • Updated content is as follows: Transaction speed has improved Highly integrated design ....
  • In my sentences, is the bold part correct?
  • Yes Is the verb 'is' correct in this case?
  • Yes I'd say this.
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Hi,
We updated the sofware ABC.
Updated content is as follows:


  • Transaction speed has improved
  • Highly integrated design
  • ....


    • ...


    In my sentences, is the bold part correct? Yes

    Is the verb 'is' correct in this case? Yes

    I'd say this.
    We have updated the ABC software as follows:
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This is fine: Updated content is as follows:
.
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CliveWe have updated the ABC software as follows:

  • Transaction speed has been improved
  • Design is now highly integrated 
Thank you very much, Clive.
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Mister Micawber.
This is fine: Updated content is as follows:
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Two 'Yes's' encourage me!

Thanks, Mister
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