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Circleastar Posted 22 years ago

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Sometimes I feel like giving up.

I think what the use you’re not enough

I close my eyes blink back the tears

I wish away my dreams and fears

Because they’re doing nothing for me



I cut through once still not enough

I cut through twice I’m giving up

I cut and cut going farther down this road to
nowhere

Someday soon I’ll cut too deep

Someday soon I’ll finally sleep…in peace.



Things just keep on getting rough

I really wish I’d toughen up

I shut the door turn off the lights

I cry all day and cry all night

Because I’m going nowhere fast
  

Top answer

Circleastar, I think it's very sad, and most of all, you should never give up. I hope you are not really feeling this way. But you do well with the words.

— Lilbit

  • Circleastar, I think it's very sad, and most of all, you should never give up.
  • I hope you are not really feeling this way.
  • But you do well with the words.
  • It does get your point across.
  • Give us a couple more to check out.
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Circleastar,

I think it's very sad, and most of all, you should never give up. I hope you are not really feeling this way. But you do well with the words. It does get your point across. Give us a couple more to check out.
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I know exactly how you feel because I have sometimes felt like that too. I think you should be brave and not throw in the towel, remember that there are people out there who love you.
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