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Jackson6612 Posted 18 years ago
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Until one day when someone changed it...

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May I ask you something? Who has changed the EnglishForward interface? Whoever did it, he didn't do a very good thing and he didn't take the EnglishForward to a step further.
I still remember the day when I was googling for some website where I can post my queries about english language. My googling resulted in a list of hundreds of websites and I chose EnglishForward because it seemed very simple and less graphical. Everything was going really smoothly and I really enjoyed being part of these forums. Until one day when someone changed it to make it look more flashy and attractive, perhaps in a hope for attachting larger audience. I'm afraid this won't happen and perhaps it will do the opposite.By the way, I don't find it attractive or more functional, not in the least. Now I don't really enjoy posting anymore. In a way I'm being forced by myself to post here because what else I can do. Besides that this new interface has a lot of problems like I can see coloured text in my posts, perhaps others can. What is the possible reason for creating all this havoc? I know I shouldn't have asked you this but who else would care to answer me!
  

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) I still remember the day when I was googling for some website where I could_ post my queries about _the_ english language. ). ) and I really enjoyed being part of these forums.

— Ant_222

  • ) I still remember the day when I was googling for some website where I could_ post my queries about _the_ english language.
  • ).
  • ) and I really enjoyed being part of these forums.
  • Until one day when someone changed _its design to a more flashy and attractive one_ (attractive?
  • ), perhaps in a hope for attacting _a_ larger audience.
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  Here's my (again, not very good I suppose...) try:      (I did't draw attention to your style trying to focus  on  the    worst mistakes...)        I still remember the day when I was googling for some  website    where I could_ post my queries about _the_ english  language.    _I  found_  hundreds  of  websites  _but_  _my   choice   was_    EnglishForward because it _was_ very simple
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Anton said: [Here's my (again, not very good I suppose...)]
Anton, why would you say that?! You help was always beneficial to me and I'm sure it will always be that way.
And thanks a lot for taking all the trouble to make the corrections.
Wish best wishes, Jackson
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  Glad to know it!        But my English is not very good.  Sometimes  I  make  mistakes    when I am sure I am right,  and  often  I  feel  something  is    wrong, but don't know what exactly, and in such  situations  I    prefer to preceede (or end) my post with a warning...
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Your English is quite good and everyone makes a mistake once in a while. No flattery intended!
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0Anton, I forgot to tell you that the link you provided above was really helpful. It really seemed like you were speaking for me. Thanks a lot.02br
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