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Ari25 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Unsure about the grammar
Can anyone help me with this sentence? " I am proud of the service I provide to customers and happy to see that the other customer service agents think of me as someone who excels at her job. " Thank you!
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I see that you asked this question a while ago, but I'll answer just in case you still want to know. The only thing I'd do to your sentence, as far as grammar and word choice goes, is to change "the service I provide to customers" to "the service I provide for customers". " You could make the sentence shorter, but you would lose some of the meaning.
- I see that you asked this question a while ago, but I'll answer just in case you still want to know.
- The only thing I'd do to your sentence, as far as grammar and word choice goes, is to change "the service I provide to customers" to "the service I provide for customers".
- " You could make the sentence shorter, but you would lose some of the meaning.
- "I'm proud of the work I do" would still work, but if you're trying to convince someone that you are a good worker, the short sentence gives you no credibility.
- Not mentioning any other customer service agents means you might be the only person who likes the work you do.
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I see that you asked this question a while ago, but I'll answer just in case you still want to know.
The only thing I'd do to your sentence, as far as grammar and word choice goes, is to change "the service I provide to customers" to "the service I provide for customers". There isn't really anything wrong with using "to," but it sounds better if you use "for." "To" is used more when somet
The only thing I'd do to your sentence, as far as grammar and word choice goes, is to change "the service I provide to customers" to "the service I provide for customers". There isn't really anything wrong with using "to," but it sounds better if you use "for." "To" is used more when somet
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