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Jackson6612 Posted 18 years ago
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University officials said they have found that over 7,000 degrees...

Sentence taken from a newspaper: University officials said they have found that over 7,000 degrees of graduates and post-graduates in science, arts and commerce streams and even engineering had not collected their original degrees.

The above sentence has been taken from a certain online newspaper. I would have written the above sentence as:

University officials said they had found that over 7,000 degrees of graduates and post-graduates in science, arts and commerce streams and even engineering had not collected their original degrees.

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Hi, Sentence taken from a newspaper: University officials said they have found that over 7,000 degrees of graduates and post-graduates in science, arts and commerce streams and even engineering had not collected their original degrees. The above sentence has been taken from a certain online newspaper. I would have written the above sentence as: University officials said they had found that over 7,000 degrees of graduates and post-graduates in science, arts and commerce streams and even engineering had not collected their original degrees.

  • Hi, Sentence taken from a newspaper: University officials said they have found that over 7,000 degrees of graduates and post-graduates in science, arts and commerce streams and even engineering had not collected their original degrees.
  • The above sentence has been taken from a certain online newspaper.
  • I would have written the above sentence as: University officials said they had found that over 7,000 degrees of graduates and post-graduates in science, arts and commerce streams and even engineering had not collected their original degrees.
  • What do you think - which version is more correct?
  • Your version sounds fine, with ( had found .
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Hi,

Sentence taken from a newspaper: University officials said they have found that over 7,000 degrees of graduates and post-graduates in science, arts and commerce streams and even engineering had not collected their original degrees.

The above sentence has been taken from a certain online newspaper. I would have written the above sentence as:
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"... said they have found ..." is typical journalistic reporting.

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CJ

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