University motion letter

Hi everyone! I'm writing a motivation letter to apply to a master course in a european university, can anyone tell me their opinions about it? Any feedback will be really appreciated!

XXXX University
2015 Sept
Dear Selection Board
I am applying for the European-Chinese Business and Economics Studies for the fall of 2015.

I graduated with a Bachelor degree in Cultural and Linguistic Mediation on November 2014, and I aim to continue my study in the business field. The reason why I got interested in business is that during high school I started helping in my family business, and working at the hotel during my summer vacation as part time job since I was a freshman. Right now I am working as receptionist in my family’s hotel, where through insertions and the instrument of our hotel on a Chinese portal our chinese guest affluence went from 2 guests on 2011 to 43 in 2015. .This experience gave me the drive to acquire the knowledge required to act as an intermediary between Chinese and foreign markets, with a special interest on European firms dealing with chinese businnesses.

To achieve this goal I attended Ca’ Foscari three-year bachelor course in Cultural and Linguistic Mediation, which focused on Mandarin and English commercial and specific language. The MLC program also supplied classes on Business Economics, Business English and Interpreting.
I got a special interest in custom regulations and law, which I chose as an extra curricular course, and which I elaborated further on my bachelor thesis concerning the import-export of perishable items, focusing on the aquaculture market. The 5 months study period I spent at Beijing Capital Normal University confirmed my resolution to bring further my education regarding Chinese import-export commercial concerns.

My reasons for choosing HWS CEEBS program relates to the business and language classes which would supply the knowledge that my bachelor found the basis of. Asking the previous intakes students on Facebook, they stated the university classes, especially the businness ones, as excellent, and many pointed out how their present careers would not had been possible without their studies at CEEBS. My career goal of working as an import-export advisor knowledgeable of custom duties would find the perfect master in a university supplying a solid economic knowledge and honing my skills in the Mandarin language.

I am very confident that to pursue my ambitions and dreams from Berlin HWS is one of the best decisions I have made in my life.

Thank you for your consideration. I am look forward to your response.

Sincerely yours,
XXX