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RONIN1987 Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing

University Letter

Hi
I just wrote this letter and I will be grateful,if someone could give me
their opinion regarding grammer and word choice.I have to use X Y Z instead of names in some places.

I have always been interested in studying and working with people who have different educational and cultural backgrounds.I think it would be a great privilege to work with various people with different strengths who work together toward a common goal.Approximately 10 months ago,I found your program and immediately got intersted in it because it has all the features that I have always wanted.The most interesting feature is that the program is very unique.According to Y, There are only few programs which focused on the X in Europe.This is incredible because it would be almost impossible to diagnose most of the diseases without having a clear picture from internal organs and tissues.The other interesting feature of the X is its diversity.It is very beautiful that a program could get together different scientific fields from biomedical sciences, medicine, engineering, chemistry, physics in the same place.it only indicates that how much X is comprehensive. During my education in Z,I could had been familiarized with laboratory practices, thanks to courses like histology;microbiology; pharmacology; toxicology and biochemistry.In addition,because of radiology,I am familiar with some imaging techniques.
I think by studying X,because of familarties with the newest imaging methods and techniques,I will have the opportunity to increase my knowledge in medicine and biology.Therefore,I am sure that I am going to be a useful person in heath section.
  
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