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Neganiga Posted 9 years ago
Letter Writing

university application - statement of purpose

Dear readers, I am writting my statement of pupose right now, the guideline is outline 'the reason you wish to study at the university', I am planning to put these sentences in my writting, could you please correct me? or do you have any advices?

- I AM PARTICULARLY LOOKING FOR A PROGRAM THAT INCLUDED PRACTICAL TRAINING

- I HOPE TO CONTRIBUTE IN REAL WORD CASE STUDIES AS THIS PLACE IS WELL KNOWN FOR THAT

- I AM ABLE TO CHOOSE UNITS THAT SUITS MY PLAN

- THIS PLACE HAS A DIVERSITY ENVIRONMENT THAT WILL HELP ME TO GET MORE EXPERIENCES IN COMMUNICATION

- THIS PLACE HAS A DIVERSITY ENVIRONMENT THAT WILL BE A BENEFIT FOR MY COMMUNICATION EXPERIENCES
  

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1- I am particularly looking for a program that includes practical training. 2- I hope to contribute to real-world case studies, which your institution is renowned for. 4- The culturally diverse study environment at *** will help enhance my interpersonal and communication skills.

  • 1- I am particularly looking for a program that includes practical training.
  • 2- I hope to contribute to real-world case studies, which your institution is renowned for.
  • 4- The culturally diverse study environment at *** will help enhance my interpersonal and communication skills.
  • I didn't understand #3, and #5 appears to be a repeat.
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1- I am particularly looking for a program that includes practical training.
2- I hope to contribute to real-world case studies, which your institution is renowned for.
4- The culturally diverse study environment at *** will help enhance my interpersonal and communication skills.
I didn't understand #3, and #5 appears to be a repeat.

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