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Enchantress Posted 7 years ago
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Unfairly imposed according to him, so that he

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Is this sentence grammatical and coherent?

Josh's asked me to overturn the ban to the server, unfairly imposed according to him, so that he can collect and analyse the data about the rare specimen recently discovered.

  

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Yes, that's OK, but the sentence is a little busy. A slightly simpler way to say it would be this. Josh thinks the ban to the server was unfairly imposed.

— Clive

  • Yes, that's OK, but the sentence is a little busy.
  • A slightly simpler way to say it would be this.
  • Josh thinks the ban to the server was unfairly imposed.
  • He's asked me to overturn it so that he can collect and analyze the data about the rare specimen recently discovered.
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Yes, that's OK, but the sentence is a little busy. A slightly simpler way to say it would be this.

Josh thinks the ban to the server was unfairly imposed. He's asked me to overturn it so that he can collect and analyze the data about the rare specimen recently discovered.

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