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Contiluo Posted 13 years ago
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uneven distribution
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What’s more, our society is forming the M-shape of social structure. That is to say, extreme disparity between the rich and the poor is worsening while the middle class is fast vanishing. Owing to the uneven distribution of wealth, cries of discontent rise all round. There are conflicts and hostility between the rich and the poor. In addition, soaring prices of commodities has posed a risk to the livelihood of people. All business languishes and the means of the people have been used up.
What’s more, our society is forming the M-shape of social structure. That is to say, extreme disparity between the rich and the poor is worsening while the middle class is fast vanishing. Owing to the uneven distribution of wealth, cries of discontent rise all round. There are conflicts and hostility between the rich and the poor. In addition, soaring prices of commodities has posed a risk to the livelihood of people. All business languishes and the means of the people have been used up.
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In terms of pure grammar, there isn't much wrong with it. contiluo What’s more, our society is becoming an M-shape d social structure. That is to say, extreme disparity between the rich and the poor is worsening while the middle class is fast vanishing.
- In terms of pure grammar, there isn't much wrong with it.
- contiluo What’s more, our society is becoming an M-shape d social structure.
- That is to say, extreme disparity between the rich and the poor is worsening while the middle class is fast vanishing.
- Owing to the uneven distribution of wealth, cries of discontent rise all round.
- There are conflicts and hostility between the rich and the poor.
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In terms of pure grammar, there isn't much wrong with it.
contiluoWhat’s more, our society is becoming an M-shaped social structure. That is to say, extreme disparity between the rich and the poor is worsening while the middle class is fast vanishing. Owing to the uneven distribution of wealth, cries of discontent rise all round. There are conflicts and
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