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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Understanding for each other
Please check the following paragraph.
Affections need to be operated, need to show understanding for each other. Quarrel is inevitable. The difficult thing is endeavoring to conduct and identify yourselves with each other.
Affections need to be operated, need to show understanding for each other. Quarrel is inevitable. The difficult thing is endeavoring to conduct and identify yourselves with each other.
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The grammar is OK, but the underlined are wrong vocabulary choices: I don't understand what you want to say: Affections need to be operated , need to show ( 'Affections need to show'?? ) understanding for each other. Quarrel is inevitable.
- The grammar is OK, but the underlined are wrong vocabulary choices: I don't understand what you want to say: Affections need to be operated , need to show ( 'Affections need to show'??
- ) understanding for each other.
- Quarrel is inevitable.
- The difficult thing is endeavoring to conduct and identify yourselves with each other.
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The grammar is OK, but the underlined are wrong vocabulary choices: I don't understand what you want to say:
Affections need to be operated, need to show ('Affections need to show'??) understanding for each other. Quarrel is inevitable. The difficult thing is endeavoring to conduct and identify yourselves with each other.
Affections need to be operated, need to show ('Affections need to show'??) understanding for each other. Quarrel is inevitable. The difficult thing is endeavoring to conduct and identify yourselves with each other.
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These sentences are translated from a Chinese prose. I tried to rewrite as following. Here, the word "affection" refers to love between man and women. Is it acceptable or natural?
1. Affections need to be executed, need to consider for each other. Quarrel is inevitable. The difficult thing is endeavoring to implement and identify yourselves with each other.
2. Love needs
1. Affections need to be executed, need to consider for each other. Quarrel is inevitable. The difficult thing is endeavoring to implement and identify yourselves with each other.
2. Love needs
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I have selected the meaningful final sentence, but I still have no idea what the underlined mean:
1. Affection needs to be executed, need to consider for each other. Quarrel is inevitable. The difficult thing is endeavoring to fulfill all your responsibilities and identify yourselves with each other.
2. Love needs to be performed, needs to be sympat
1. Affection needs to be executed, need to consider for each other. Quarrel is inevitable. The difficult thing is endeavoring to fulfill all your responsibilities and identify yourselves with each other.
2. Love needs to be performed, needs to be sympat
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Perhaps the original meaning can be expressed as following.
1. Love between man and woman needs to be fostered / nurtured / cultivated.
2. Lovers should always be considerate for each other. They will be the shoulder to lean on when you are upset or troubled, and they will share in your joys and fun. Whether you are happy or sad, your good friends will be the first people that yo
1. Love between man and woman needs to be fostered / nurtured / cultivated.
2. Lovers should always be considerate for each other. They will be the shoulder to lean on when you are upset or troubled, and they will share in your joys and fun. Whether you are happy or sad, your good friends will be the first people that yo
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OK, then I suggest something like this:
Affection/Love needs to be nurtured. Quarrel is inevitable, but lovers need to cultivate consideration for each other. The difficult thing is endeavoring to fulfill all your responsibilities and identify with each other.
Affection/Love needs to be nurtured. Quarrel is inevitable, but lovers need to cultivate consideration for each other. The difficult thing is endeavoring to fulfill all your responsibilities and identify with each other.
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