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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary
Underlined words
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Please take a look at the following santence and pay attention to the underlined words. Are these the best choices according to the context (in your opinion)?
Only the general meeting of shareholders shall be entitled to make amendments to the articles of incorporation, take a decision on bringing an action against board member, founder or shareholder, as well as on appointing a company’s representative for conducting a matter at the court, take a decision on winding-up the company, continuing operation or re-organization thereof, other matters which, according to the law and articles of incorporation, shall be transferred into the competency of the general meeting of the shareholders.
I truly appreciate your input!
Thanks!
Please take a look at the following santence and pay attention to the underlined words. Are these the best choices according to the context (in your opinion)?
Only the general meeting of shareholders shall be entitled to make amendments to the articles of incorporation, take a decision on bringing an action against board member, founder or shareholder, as well as on appointing a company’s representative for conducting a matter at the court, take a decision on winding-up the company, continuing operation or re-organization thereof, other matters which, according to the law and articles of incorporation, shall be transferred into the competency of the general meeting of the shareholders.
I truly appreciate your input!
Thanks!
Top answer
The underlined words are not the problem. The entire paragraph is awkward and unclear. It would help if you used direct verbs and parallel structure.
- The underlined words are not the problem.
- The entire paragraph is awkward and unclear.
- It would help if you used direct verbs and parallel structure.
- If you do not mind, here is my suggested revision: Only the general meeting of shareholders shall be entitled to amend the articles of incorporation, to decide on bringing an action against a board member, founder or shareholder, to appoint a company’s representative for conducting a matter at court, to determine if the company is to be dissolved, continued or re-organized , and to finalize all other matters which, according to the law and articles of incorporation, have been delegated to the general meeting of the shareholders.
- I hope this helps.
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The underlined words are not the problem. The entire paragraph is awkward and unclear. It would help if you used direct verbs and parallel structure. If you do not mind, here is my suggested revision:
Only the general meeting of shareholders shall be entitled to amend the articles of incorporation, to decide on bringing an action against a board member, founder or
Only the general meeting of shareholders shall be entitled to amend the articles of incorporation, to decide on bringing an action against a board member, founder or
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