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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Please look at the underlined parts! Do I need to change anything?

The members of the teams had to answer questions about the company's foundation, name rest of the group’s companies and place a traffic sign to drive around the pothole. As there were many teams and practically all of them arrived simultaneously, there was long line at the box’s doors. To pass the time, the teams could talk about the company and receive additional promotional prizes.

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Anonymous Do I need to change anything? I would: The teams answered questions about the company's foundation, named the group’s other companies, and erected a pothole warning sign. As many teams arrived simultaneously, there was a long line at the box doors.

— Mister Micawber

  • Anonymous Do I need to change anything?
  • I would: The teams answered questions about the company's foundation, named the group’s other companies, and erected a pothole warning sign.
  • As many teams arrived simultaneously, there was a long line at the box doors.
  • To pass the time, the teams talked about the company and received additional promotional prizes.
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AnonymousDo I need to change anything?
I would:

The teams answered questions about the company's foundation, named the group’s other companies, and erected a pothole warning sign. As many teams arrived simultaneously, there was a long line at the box doors. To pass the time, the teams talked about the company and received additional promotional pri
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