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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Underlined part - okay?
Hi!
Please take a look at the underlined parts. Are they okay?
In the submission, the applicant specifies that on August 25, 2004 the place of residence of Sofia and her family was inspected by a social affairs inspector who recognized that the apartment is beautifully furnished and there are home-made handicrafts there.
Much appreciated!
Please take a look at the underlined parts. Are they okay?
In the submission, the applicant specifies that on August 25, 2004 the place of residence of Sofia and her family was inspected by a social affairs inspector who recognized that the apartment is beautifully furnished and there are home-made handicrafts there.
Much appreciated!
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Yes, the underlined parts are okay, but I would make a couple of small changes. First, I would put the report in the past tense. " Thus: In the submission , the applicant specifies that on August 25, 2004 the place of residence of Sofia and her family was inspected by a social affairs inspector who recognized that the apartment was beautifully furnished and that there are home-made handicrafts were there .
- Yes, the underlined parts are okay, but I would make a couple of small changes.
- First, I would put the report in the past tense.
- " Thus: In the submission , the applicant specifies that on August 25, 2004 the place of residence of Sofia and her family was inspected by a social affairs inspector who recognized that the apartment was beautifully furnished and that there are home-made handicrafts were there .
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Yes, the underlined parts are okay, but I would make a couple of small changes.
First, I would put the report in the past tense. And I would reword the end of the sentence to put it in parallel form and thus avoid the double "there."
Thus:
In the submission, the applicant specifies that on August 25, 2004 the place of residence of Sofia and her fami
First, I would put the report in the past tense. And I would reword the end of the sentence to put it in parallel form and thus avoid the double "there."
Thus:
In the submission, the applicant specifies that on August 25, 2004 the place of residence of Sofia and her fami
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