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Tsundere Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Unclear sentence

Hello, could anyone please explain to me how this sentence is unclear and how can I fix it?

Thank you!!


Second, people have started to learn more about marriage and what are its important keys, which are communication, forgiveness, and active istening, etc.

  

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You need to reword. Second, people have started to learn more about the important keys to a successful marriage, which are . .

— Clive

  • You need to reword.
  • Second, people have started to learn more about the important keys to a successful marriage, which are .
  • .
  • Now you can try to finish it.
  • Don't say etc.
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You need to reword.

Second, people have started to learn more about the important keys to a successful marriage, which are . . .

Now you can try to finish it. Don't say etc. in an essay.

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