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Ben9108 Posted 20 years ago
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uncertainly replied
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1.Your staff uncertainly replied that the timer was an option which was not required and therefore not in the purchase agreement at the time of sale.
2.However, unprofessional service provided and poor working attitude of your staff push us to the utmost limits of endurance.
1.Your staff uncertainly replied that the timer was an option which was not required and therefore not in the purchase agreement at the time of sale.
2.However, unprofessional service provided and poor working attitude of your staff push us to the utmost limits of endurance.
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1. Your staff tentatively replied that the timer was an option, and therefore not included in the purchase agreement at the time of sale . 2.
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- Your staff tentatively replied that the timer was an option, and therefore not included in the purchase agreement at the time of sale .
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- However, the poor service has been a disappointment to us .
- -- Your original was far too strongly phrased, and will only make the recipient more intransigent.
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1. Your staff tentatively replied that the timer was an option, and therefore not included in the purchase agreement at the time of sale.
2. However, the poor service has been a disappointment to us. -- Your original was far too strongly phrased, and will only make the recipient more intransigent. Basic business sense (as well as the elements of courtesy) legislates agai
2. However, the poor service has been a disappointment to us. -- Your original was far too strongly phrased, and will only make the recipient more intransigent. Basic business sense (as well as the elements of courtesy) legislates agai
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