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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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If you were a girl and you were having a drink at a street cafe in the cool evening breeze. People were walking by the cafe and you were waiting for your friends. A guy at a table not too far away took out his camera phone and seemed like taking photos of you but you were unsure. After thinking for some time, you noticed a couple of your blouse buttons had become unbuttoned, revealing much of your boobs and it hit you that he could have been taking photos of you. He looked like he was getting ready to leave. What would you do?

Are there any mistakes?
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Your first sentence is an if-clause with no independent clause. '*****' isn't my favorite word for that part of the anatomy .

  • Your first sentence is an if-clause with no independent clause.
  • '*****' isn't my favorite word for that part of the anatomy .
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Your first sentence is an if-clause with no independent clause.
'*****' isn't my favorite word for that part of the anatomy .
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Philip'*****' isn't my favorite word for that part of the anatomy
What is your favourite word then Philip? (snigger)
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Imagine you were a girl having a drink at a street cafe in the cool evening breeze. People were walking by and you were waiting for your friends. A guy at a nearby table took out his mobile and it seemed as though he was taking photos of you but you weren't sure. After pondering over it for a bit, you realised a couple of your blouse buttons had come undone, revealing plenty. This made you feel ce
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Thanks, everyone.
Huevos, Could you help me understand the following?

1. Why did you change " he was getting ready to leave"?
2. Why didyou change "it hit me"?

Thanks.
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New2grammar1. Why did you change " he was getting ready to leave"?
2. Why didyou change "it hit me"?
OK.
New2grammartaking photos
New2grammarcamera phone
I changed this because it is redundant. Obviously you need a camera to take photos.
New2grammarhe could hav

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