U & Me

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this is my peom hope u like it

I don't know if we're in the beginning or in the final stage..

Every door we’ve tried to open seems to be locked forever..

How life supposed to goes on without you and me together..

We’ve been through things worst and now you want to slip away..

I’m waiting for your next step … there is nothing here .. but the wind

the people has gone.. the rain has stopped.. there is nothing but me ..

Im despaired im hopeless and I can’t take anymore from this

You said that I’m unbreakable look what I’ve become now ..

im just a remain of a girl who was crush in someone like you

We were mean to be together but I can’t and you can’t so who can

I think I better give up and walk away , I’m sorry I’ve to make that step

life will easy for both of us, there is no more “ you & me “

Woodward · Accepted Answer

Hi Cinderallah,

It sounds like it's from your own personal experience and that is where emotions flow and create such wonderful poems.
There was one part that I wasn't sure about...

I'm just the remains of a girl who .... "was crush in someone like you"
Are you trying to express ....
a girl who had a crush on someone like you OR
a girl who was crushed by someone like you ? (I think it is this one)

Do you know the difference between the two expressions? They convey different meanings.

Cinderellah · Answer

hi

well.. thanks Woodward ...

responding for your question ..

I know the difference between the two expression and the one that i meant

is

a girl who had a crush on someone like you

thank u for correcting my mistake and sorry for that

peace

Cinderellah

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