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Park sang joon Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Typo??
Set in the http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alternate_timeline of the years 2007-2010 (2049 in the U.S. dub), giant monsters and conquering http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Extraterrestrial_life start to appear, as was foretold by an apocalyptic prophecy about an uncontrollable chaos over the http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Earth. Facing the threat, the TPC (Terrestrial Peaceable Consortium) is created, such as its branch, GUTS (Global Unlimited Task Squad). Through a http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Holographic message in a capsule found by researchers, the GUTS gets knowledge about a golden pyramid built by an ancient civilization.
I think "such as" should be "as such" or only "as."
And I'd like to know if my thought is right.
Thank you in advance for your help.
I think "such as" should be "as such" or only "as."
And I'd like to know if my thought is right.
Thank you in advance for your help.
Top answer
"such as" is used incorrectly. I am not clear what was intended. Neither of your suggestions works.
- "such as" is used incorrectly.
- I am not clear what was intended.
- Neither of your suggestions works.
- Also, "Facing the threat" seems to be dangling.
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"such as" is used incorrectly. I am not clear what was intended. Neither of your suggestions works.
Also, "Facing the threat" seems to be dangling.
Also, "Facing the threat" seems to be dangling.
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