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The female rookie (name) who, having failed aptitude tests, is placed under the observation of a trainer, who is responisble for evaluating her performance as they inflitrate an illegal drug syndicate.


Are the commas in the right places around who and as. I think the second comma is wrong, but how do you judge as in terms of taking a comma?




We sat out on the lawn in the sun, a perfect end to the day, but things were about to change.

We sat out on the lawn in the sun, a perfect end to the day but


Do we view the phrase as extra information when surrounded by commas (is it still in apposition) and does the conjunction always require a comma before it. As techinically it's not following on from an independent clause but a phrase ?


  

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The female rookie (name) who, having failed aptitude tests, is placed under the observation of a trainer, who is responisble for evaluating her performance as they inflitrate an illegal drug syndicate. Are the commas in the right places around who and as. I think the second comma is wrong, but how do you judge as in terms of taking a comma?

  • The female rookie (name) who, having failed aptitude tests, is placed under the observation of a trainer, who is responisble for evaluating her performance as they inflitrate an illegal drug syndicate.
  • Are the commas in the right places around who and as.
  • I think the second comma is wrong, but how do you judge as in terms of taking a comma?
  • Here's how I see it.
  • The sentence above is incorrect because it has no main clause.
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The female rookie (name) who, having failed aptitude tests, is placed under the observation of a trainer, who is responisble for evaluating her performance as they inflitrate an illegal drug syndicate.


Are the commas in the right places around who and as. I think the second comma is wrong, but how do you judge as in terms of taking a

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