In light of the advice given to me by another member earlier, I was just wondering, would this be easier to read it was split into two sentences? Or perhaps a hyphen would be a better idea?
Thanks in advance, Emma
The film’s plot is centred on a criminal named Randal McMurphy who has been imprisoned for the rape of a young girl, but is moved to a psychological hospital to be evaluated, and when asked why he has been moved, he says that it is because ‘I fight and *** too much.’
With hypen:
The film’s plot is centred on a criminal named Randal McMurphy who has been imprisoned for the rape of a young girl, but is moved to a psychological hospital to be evaluated; when asked why he has been moved, he says that it is because ‘I fight and *** too much.’
Top answer
The second version is better. I don't see a hyphen. I see a semi-colon.
— Clive
The second version is better.
I don't see a hyphen.
I see a semi-colon.
That's not wrong, but I would use a period.
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