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Eddie88 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Two sentences. Are they grammatical?

Sentences in question:

I stuttered, red-faced, sweating.



In this sentence, I have a main clause 'I stuttered, followed by two adjectives.



1)Do you think this is grammatical with adjectives or do they have to be verbs: I stuttered, went red-faced, and was sweating?



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I went red-faced, stuttered, and began to sweat



2)Could you say stuttered is either a verb or an adjective here?





Thanks in advance.
  

Top answer

1) The sentence is grammatical. Typically, you would say "I stuttered, red-faced and sweating". The omission of "and" gives it a more literary feel, as if the author is consciously crafting a style.

  • 1) The sentence is grammatical.
  • Typically, you would say "I stuttered, red-faced and sweating".
  • The omission of "and" gives it a more literary feel, as if the author is consciously crafting a style.
  • 2) "Stuttered" is a verb.
  • For "stuttered" to be an adjective (in any context) it would have to correspond to the use of a transitive verb ("something stuttered me"), which isn't possible in any sense of "stutter" that I'm familiar with.
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1) The sentence is grammatical. Typically, you would say "I stuttered, red-faced and sweating". The omission of "and" gives it a more literary feel, as if the author is consciously crafting a style.

2) "Stuttered" is a verb. For "stuttered" to be an adjective (in any context) it would have to correspond to the use of a transitive verb ("something stuttered me"), which isn't possible in a
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<<I stuttered, went red-faced, and was sweating?>>



This is my train of thoughts and I'd approach it this way. stuttered, red-faced and sweating are mental and emontioanl states of mind. I feel this sentece can be alternatively expressed as follows to depict one's feelings in differ
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Thanks, Goodman.

The alternatives are definitely better.

I suppose here is another alternative:

I was sweating, feeling red faced, (and) stuttering.
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Thanks, Mr Wordy! Your first answer was great, but could you explain #2 again, please.

Stuttered" is a verb. For "stuttered" to be an adjective (in any context) it would have to correspond to the use of a transitive verb ("something stuttered me"), which isn't possible in any sense of "stutter" that I'm familiar with.

Could you explain this further, please? I would have thought

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