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Levis1 Posted 9 years ago
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Please check my grammar and punctuation: It's unbelievable beautiful and so laid back over there, now I know why people choose to retire in Hawaii.

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It's unbelievable beautiful and so laid back over there. I now know why people choose to retire in Hawaii.


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levis1 Are both OK? No; only this: It's unbelievably beautiful and so laid back over there. I now know why people choose to retire in Hawaii.

— Mister Micawber

  • levis1 Are both OK?
  • No; only this: It's unbelievably beautiful and so laid back over there.
  • I now know why people choose to retire in Hawaii.
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levis1Are both OK?

No; only this:

It's unbelievably beautiful and so laid back over there. I now know why people choose to retire in Hawaii.

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