The man enters, walks past Eve hiding behind a plant, and steps into the pool of blood on the floor.
Is it OK to write '...Eve hiding...' instead of '...Eve who's hiding...' if it's already known where Eve is hiding?
Would you put a comma after 'Eve'?
anonymous already known where Eve is hiding In that case it's The man walks past Eve, (hidden) behind the plant, and steps into ... CJ
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anonymousalready known where Eve is hiding
In that case it's
The man walks past Eve, (hidden) behind the plant, and steps into ....
CJ