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Hi, I'm writing a story. Two friends live together in a very messy apartment. Several "scenes" in the story describes that they sit on the couch drinking beers, totally oblivious to the mess around them. Later in the story they have a big fight resulting in one of the friends moving out. But in the end this "scene" comes up revealing that the friend has moved back in and everything now is back to how it was before the fight. I have written the "scene" like this:
As if nothing had ever happened between them, Mark and Steve sat on the couch drinking beers, oblivious to the still growing mess in the apartment.
Is it OK? Is "oblivious" the correct word?
There are three parts in it (separated by commas). Is the order that I have chosen OK or would you write it in another way?
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Is it OK? Yes Is "oblivious" the correct word? Yes There are three parts in it (separated by commas).
- Is it OK?
- Yes Is "oblivious" the correct word?
- Yes There are three parts in it (separated by commas).
- Is the order that I have chosen OK Yes or would you write it in another way?
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Is it OK? Yes
Is "oblivious" the correct word? Yes
There are three parts in it (separated by commas). Is the order that I have chosen OK Yes or would you write it in another way?
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