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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

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As he blew her a kiss, her longing stare grew stronger and tears started welling up in her eyes.

Two questions

1. Is this grammatical?

2. does 'grew stronger' in this context mean that her stare got more longing?

  

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anonymous 1. Is this grammatical? Yes, but its style suffers.

— Mister Micawber

  • anonymous 1.
  • Is this grammatical?
  • Yes, but its style suffers.
  • As he blew her a kiss, her longing gaze grew stronger and tears welled up in her eyes.
  • anonymous 2.
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anonymous1. Is this grammatical?

Yes, but its style suffers.

As he blew her a kiss, her longing gaze grew stronger and tears welled up in her eyes.

anonymous2. does 'grew stronger' in this context mean that her stare got more longing?

Yes.

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