1-- Yes, that is OK. 2-- Normally, the comma is called for (it is a long channel and a narrow channel), but in short series like this, you can get by without it. 'Cut' is actually more professional-seeming than 'dug', so works well here-- 'cutting' such a channel is a series of careful steps in laying out and excavating it.
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