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Inchoateknowledge Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

two pps in one sentence

Consumer spending has decreased as a result of tax rises have begun to hit home.
Is it not wrong grammatically?
I have been reading it out loud and sounds to me bad.
How about this:
As a result of tax rises have begun to hit home, consumer spending is decreasing.
  

Top answer

As a result of tax increases that have begun to hit home, consumer spending has decreased. Consumer spending has decreased as a result of of tax increases that have begun to hit home. Which do you want to emphasize?

  • As a result of tax increases that have begun to hit home, consumer spending has decreased.
  • Consumer spending has decreased as a result of of tax increases that have begun to hit home.
  • Which do you want to emphasize?
  • The decrease in spending, or the tax increases as the culprit?
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As a result of tax increases that have begun to hit home, consumer spending has decreased.

Consumer spending has decreased as a result of of tax increases that have begun to hit home.

Which do you want to emphasize? The decrease in spending, or the tax increases as the culprit?
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The emphasis I wanna place on the decrease of consumer spending.
As a result of tax rises having begun to hit home, consumer spending is decreasing.
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InchoateknowledgeThe emphasis I wanna place on the decrease of consumer spending.
As a result of tax rises having begun to hit home, consumer spending is decreasing.

I'd prefer "As a result of tax rises beginning to hit home, consumer spending is decreasing."
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Grammar GeekAs a result of tax increases that have begun to hit home, consumer spending has decreased.

Consumer spending has decreased as a result of of tax increases that have begun to hit home.

I still think that tax increases, not tax rises, is the phrase you want.
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Hi,

If you don't want to speak of 'tax increases', you should say 'tax raises' rather than 'tax rises'.

Best wishes, Clive

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