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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Hi!
Which is better?
The Company shall place symbols of the association on the uniforms of the ski team in such size and according to the procedure stipulated by the international federation.
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The Company shall place symbols of the association on the uniforms of the ski team according to size and procedure stipulated by the international federation.
Thanks!
Which is better?
The Company shall place symbols of the association on the uniforms of the ski team in such size and according to the procedure stipulated by the international federation.
vs.
The Company shall place symbols of the association on the uniforms of the ski team according to size and procedure stipulated by the international federation.
Thanks!
Top answer
Shorter is better, but you need to distinguish "size" and "procedures" as these are different requirements. For example: The Company shall place correctly sized symbols of the association on the uniforms of the ski team according to the procedures stipulated by the international federation.
- Shorter is better, but you need to distinguish "size" and "procedures" as these are different requirements.
- For example: The Company shall place correctly sized symbols of the association on the uniforms of the ski team according to the procedures stipulated by the international federation.
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Shorter is better, but you need to distinguish "size" and "procedures" as these are different requirements. For example:
The Company shall place correctly sized symbols of the association on the uniforms of the ski team according to the procedures stipulated by the international federation.
The Company shall place correctly sized symbols of the association on the uniforms of the ski team according to the procedures stipulated by the international federation.
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AnonymousWhich is better?You have been asking a lot of questions about the wording of a legal agreement. You should be aware that most of the people responding are native speakers and/or teachers, not lawyers. You should have any legal document checked by a lawyer before you sign anything. We are not qualified to tell you the possible legal consequences of w
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