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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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In 2012, overall consumer prices maintained a moderate growth which was close to the level of seasonal variations– average level of consumption prices over the year grew by 2.3%.

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In 2012, overall consumer prices maintained a moderate growth close to the level of seasonal changes– average level of consumption prices over the year grew by 2.3%.


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In 2012, overall consumer prices showed moderate growth commensurate with seasonal cha nges. 3%. 'Consumption prices' seems meaningless to me.

  • In 2012, overall consumer prices showed moderate growth commensurate with seasonal cha nges.
  • 3%.
  • 'Consumption prices' seems meaningless to me.
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In 2012, overall consumer prices showed moderate growth commensurate with seasonal changes. Average consumption rose by 2.3%.

'Consumption prices' seems meaningless to me.
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