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Noinnocentvictim Posted 19 years ago
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TWCSR essay. Does this sound correct?
Hi, I'm 14 and this is my first exam year. I really want to achieve a 1 but I need to be able to write stylish sentences and sentence structure is one of my weak points. I would appreciate it if you could help me with this sentence as I don't know if it sounds okay or is grammarly correct.
An excellent short story I will remember for a long time to come is Ray Bradbury's " There will come soft rains", notably for it's terrifying message about humanity's demise and the techniques used to effectively create the appropriate atmosphere throughout the story. For example, using precise words, the author creates brilliant imagery (creating very accurate, vivid images in our mind) and helps express the correct mood and emotions, which plays a crucial part in personification.
An excellent short story I will remember for a long time to come is Ray Bradbury's " There will come soft rains", notably for it's terrifying message about humanity's demise and the techniques used to effectively create the appropriate atmosphere throughout the story. For example, using precise words, the author creates brilliant imagery (creating very accurate, vivid images in our mind) and helps express the correct mood and emotions, which plays a crucial part in personification.
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Hi, Welcome to the Forum. I've made some suggestions. If you'd like to revise your writing and post again, I'd be happy to have another look.
- Hi, Welcome to the Forum.
- I've made some suggestions.
- If you'd like to revise your writing and post again, I'd be happy to have another look.
- I'm 14 and this is my first exam year.
- I really want to achieve a 1 but I need to be able to write stylish sentences and sentence structure is one of my weak points.
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Hi,
Welcome to the Forum. I've made some suggestions. If you'd like to revise your writing and post again, I'd be happy to have another look.
I'm 14 and this is my first exam year. I really want to achieve a 1 but I need to be able to write stylish sentences and sentence structure is one of my weak points. I would appreciate it if you could help me with this
Welcome to the Forum. I've made some suggestions. If you'd like to revise your writing and post again, I'd be happy to have another look.
I'm 14 and this is my first exam year. I really want to achieve a 1 but I need to be able to write stylish sentences and sentence structure is one of my weak points. I would appreciate it if you could help me with this
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