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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
TV commercial Writing Assignment
I have a question my teacher from art institute says my grammar sucks I agree but I was wondering if you could help me with this problem with my writing assignment like tell me whats wrong or how it is.
Dominos Pizza is using garlic herb for the new recipe which the company is not only promising 100% real mozzarella cheese. But assuring that the new recipe is even better then before. On TV the company makes it persuasive by using and putting garlic herb on the pizza which also put thoughts in your head like “Is it better? Is it good?” Those kinds of things also gets you thinking critically because the commercial also forces you to be open minded as in “What did they used before this pizza?” It’s not something I would typically eat but my brother (Jake Burnett) says its good I even asked him what he thought of dominos. His thoughts were “It’s even better then before.” Which he telling you he’s always liked dominos. Perhaps I should have looked more closely at the commercial at the body languages of the chefs for clues or cues. For the most part no other expressions were used in the television commercial.
Dominos Pizza is using garlic herb for the new recipe which the company is not only promising 100% real mozzarella cheese. But assuring that the new recipe is even better then before. On TV the company makes it persuasive by using and putting garlic herb on the pizza which also put thoughts in your head like “Is it better? Is it good?” Those kinds of things also gets you thinking critically because the commercial also forces you to be open minded as in “What did they used before this pizza?” It’s not something I would typically eat but my brother (Jake Burnett) says its good I even asked him what he thought of dominos. His thoughts were “It’s even better then before.” Which he telling you he’s always liked dominos. Perhaps I should have looked more closely at the commercial at the body languages of the chefs for clues or cues. For the most part no other expressions were used in the television commercial.
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Hi, I think the reason you have not had a response is that you are right. Your garmmar is not good at all, and you have so many errors that people do not want to take the time to correct them and explain them. If you really want to work on improving your grammar, have a look here.
- Hi, I think the reason you have not had a response is that you are right.
- Your garmmar is not good at all, and you have so many errors that people do not want to take the time to correct them and explain them.
- If you really want to work on improving your grammar, have a look here.
- It discusses an area that you have many problems in.
- htm Best wishes,Clive
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Hi,
I think the reason you have not had a response is that you are right. Your garmmar is not good at all, and you have so many errors that people do not want to take the time to correct them and explain them.
If you really want to work on improving your grammar, have a look here. It discusses an area that you have many problems in.
I think the reason you have not had a response is that you are right. Your garmmar is not good at all, and you have so many errors that people do not want to take the time to correct them and explain them.
If you really want to work on improving your grammar, have a look here. It discusses an area that you have many problems in.
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