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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago

TV beats reality

0 Modern life seems almost devoid of reality.02br
00The fruits of the Plastic God can be seen everywhere.02br
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00I get home after a a hard day02br
00I get on my knees and pray02br
00I listen and believe what the TV Gods say02br
00Hungry Mac's is the only way!02br
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00Yeah, corny, eh?02br
00Well, what you got to say?02br
00Another few thousand got bombed away today.02br
00The Plastic God's way.02br
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00Turn it off before you go blind.02br
00Quick - before it steals your mind!02br
00I love my TV more than I love my brain itself!02br
00Will you help me Plastic Man?0-
  

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0G'day Anonymous,02br
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00That sounds like a rap song.02br
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00The constant rhyme is a bit unusual for English poetry especially when the final stanza drifts away.02br
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00I lost you with the Plastic Man statement.02br
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00I suspect that this should be in the poetry section rather than here.02br

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0If what you want is an opinion about your poem, sorry, it's not good enough for a poem.02br
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00I have heard about The Big White Porcelain ***, but your plastic one beats me.02br
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0 Moving this to poetry section. 0-
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01cite10Julielai12cite10Moving this to poetry section.12blockquote
10Why?02br
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0 A poster's suggestion (Yours, I believe) 01blockquote
01cite10Stannum12cite10I suspect that this should be in the poetry section rather than here.12br
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01cite10Julielai12cite10A poster's suggestion (Yours, I believe) 11blockquote
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20I suspect that this should be in the poetry section rather than here.22br
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20Stannum22br
20I must have just had an excellent toke at that time.2
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