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Cute572 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

TV

Please check the tenses and verb as well i have used here.
The wide-screen TV, high up on the shelf by the wall, was showing some action movie scene and making the walls shake with its loud volume. I sat quietly on the sofa below and furiously muted its volume with a remote control [comma we applied?] which was placed on nearby the small table, and settled my eyes on wall clock.

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The wide-screen TV, on the shelf high up on the wall, was showing some action movie scene and making the walls shake with its loud volume . ] which was placed nearby on the small table, and settled my eyes on the wall clock. Sittling quietly doesn't seem to work with an action that is done furiously .

  • The wide-screen TV, on the shelf high up on the wall, was showing some action movie scene and making the walls shake with its loud volume .
  • ] which was placed nearby on the small table, and settled my eyes on the wall clock.
  • Sittling quietly doesn't seem to work with an action that is done furiously .
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The wide-screen TV, on the shelf high up on the wall, was showing some action movie scene and making the walls shake with its loud volume. I sat quietly on the sofa below and furiously muted its volume with the remote control, [comma we appli
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Thanks GG!
The wide-screen TV, on the shelf high up on the wall, was showing some action movie scene and making the walls shake with its loud volume.

Doesn't it seemed repeating prepositions? How about using Over in one place?
The wide-screen TV, over the shelf high up
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Is the TV resting on the shelf? Is the TV on the wall, simply over the shelf?
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The TV is at both side, the shelf is on the wall and TV placed on it.
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At both sides of what?

If something is resting on the shelf, it is ON the shelf. If something is on the wall, and happens to be placed higher than the shelf, then it is OVER the shelf.
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I applogis, I did't explain it well.
The secene is that shelf which holds the Tv, i don't know its exact name -- tv stand i guess, and it is attached to the wall.

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