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Alc24 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

TURNS SOMEONE ON

Could someone take a look at this please?

1 What turns people on to/about her is her way of dressing, other than that/apart from that, she's banal.
2 Is this one of these movies that have music playing in the background the whole time/with music playing in the background the whole time.

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alc24 1. What turns people on to/about her is her way of dressing, other than that/apart from that, she's banal. You should replace the comma splice with a full stop.

  • alc24 1.
  • What turns people on to/about her is her way of dressing, other than that/apart from that, she's banal.
  • You should replace the comma splice with a full stop.
  • "Other than / apart from" are both okay.
  • Re "to/about": "About" works well in this situation.
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alc24 1. What turns people on to/about her is her way of dressing, other than that/apart from that, she's banal. You should replace the comma splice with a full stop.
"Other than / apart from" are both okay.
Re "to/about": "About"

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