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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Turbulence hits the plane/The plane is hit by turbulence

The flight attendants tell the man to calm down. The man tries to suppress his fear (of flying), but then a bit of turbulence hits the plane.


Please make the underscored sentence as natural as possible?

  

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" Just as the passenger tries to compose himself, a bit of turbulence hits the plane. "

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I would not use "but" and "then."

Just as the passenger tries to compose himself, a bit of turbulence hits the plane.

I would try not to repeat "man."

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