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Evo25 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Try/trying

Advertising is designed to motivate people to act (which is ) involved try/trying to persuade people to make a purchase.

Is the word in the bracket implied? which one is the proper answer ?
  

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Is the overall sentence structure correct here? It seems such a strange construction to me. Shouldn't it be something like the following?

  • Is the overall sentence structure correct here?
  • It seems such a strange construction to me.
  • Shouldn't it be something like the following?
  • Advertising is designed to motivate people to act, which involves trying to persuade people to make a purchase.
  • Kind regards Dokterjokkebrok
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Is the overall sentence structure correct here? It seems such a strange construction to me.
Shouldn't it be something like the following?
  • Advertising is designed to motivate people to act, which involves trying to persuade people to make a purchase.
Kind regards

Dokterjokkebrok
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Anyone could explain it further to us ?
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Hi,

I agree with what has already been said. Your original sentence makes no sense, no matter which of the two words in bold you choose.

Clive
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Thanks Clive. Could you revise the sentence to make it sense.
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Evo25Advertising is designed to motivate people to act (which is ) involved try/trying to persuade people to make a purchase.
This needs some help. I would split it into two sentences.

Advertising is designed to motivate people to act.
It involves trying to persuade people to make a purchase.

CJ

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