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JosephineinJapan Posted 18 years ago
Chemistry
Considered as six elements of life
Today it’s about life itself
About making the world
A better place
I dont know if its content and grammar makes sense and sounds natural enough to an English native speaker. Could anyone drop any suggestions for me.
Many thanks.
Joe
Grammar
Try to make a catchy slogan
Chemistry
Considered as six elements of life
Today it’s about life itself
About making the world
A better place
I dont know if its content and grammar makes sense and sounds natural enough to an English native speaker. Could anyone drop any suggestions for me.
Many thanks.
Joe
Top answer
Which line relates to what? What are you trying to sell to the reader?
- Which line relates to what?
- What are you trying to sell to the reader?
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Which line relates to what?
What are you trying to sell to the reader?
What are you trying to sell to the reader?
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JosephineinJapan
Chemistry
Considered as six elements of life
Today it’s about life itself
About making the world
A better place
I dont know if its content and grammar makes sense
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How about . . .
Chemistry
Six elements of life itself
Making the world better
Or
Chemistry: Making the world better, six elements at a time.
Chemistry
Six elements of life itself
Making the world better
Or
Chemistry: Making the world better, six elements at a time.
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But aren't there well over 100 elements? 118, I think? How do the six elements factor in?
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1 font 00 Encouraging the students to study their lesson[Y] 02 font 0-
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