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JosephineinJapan Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Try to make a catchy slogan


Chemistry





Considered as six elements of life





Today it’s about life itself



About making the world





A better place




I dont know if its content and grammar makes sense and sounds natural enough to an English native speaker. Could anyone drop any suggestions for me.




Many thanks.




Joe



  

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Which line relates to what? What are you trying to sell to the reader?

  • Which line relates to what?
  • What are you trying to sell to the reader?
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Which line relates to what?

What are you trying to sell to the reader?
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JosephineinJapan
Chemistry





Considered as six elements of life





Today it’s about life itself



About making the world





A better place




I dont know if its content and grammar makes sense
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How about . . .

Chemistry


Six elements of life itself


Making the world better


Or


Chemistry: Making the world better, six elements at a time.

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But aren't there well over 100 elements? 118, I think? How do the six elements factor in?
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