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Stevenukd Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
True Life
Dear Teachers,
- If we know how to let Jesus Christ enter/come into our lives, we don’t lose anything, absolutely nothing at all in what makes this life free and good. No! Only in this friendship the door of life is open widely, and we can feel the beauty and liberation. So, today with our strength and belief, on the long personal experience foundation about life, I would like to say to you dear young people: don’t be afraid of Jesus Christ, He does not take anything away, He will grant you all everything. When you all give yourself to Him, all of you will receive a hundred times. Yes! Just open all the doors for Jesus Christ, and you all will find the true life. AMEN!
- Are these sentences natural?
- Thanks a lot to Teachers,
Stevenukd.
- If we know how to let Jesus Christ enter/come into our lives, we don’t lose anything, absolutely nothing at all in what makes this life free and good. No! Only in this friendship the door of life is open widely, and we can feel the beauty and liberation. So, today with our strength and belief, on the long personal experience foundation about life, I would like to say to you dear young people: don’t be afraid of Jesus Christ, He does not take anything away, He will grant you all everything. When you all give yourself to Him, all of you will receive a hundred times. Yes! Just open all the doors for Jesus Christ, and you all will find the true life. AMEN!
- Are these sentences natural?
- Thanks a lot to Teachers,
Stevenukd.
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The above paragraph is not written very well at all. I started to correct it, but then about one third of the way through I gave up. I gave up because I could not accurately determine what some of the original sentences meant.
- The above paragraph is not written very well at all.
- I started to correct it, but then about one third of the way through I gave up.
- I gave up because I could not accurately determine what some of the original sentences meant.
- Sorry.
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The above paragraph is not written very well at all. I started to correct it, but then about one third of the way through I gave up. I gave up because I could not accurately determine what some of the original sentences meant. Sorry.
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