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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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this sentence. Can anyone help?

Our comprehensive nursing care includes, but not limited to education on topics such as disease, treatment plans, medications and diet.

Thanks. It seems awkward to me.
  

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It is awkward because when I think of nursing care, I think of changing beds, taking vital signs, giving medications, etc. I don't think of education as nursing care - nurses don't normally educate their charges.

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  • It is awkward because when I think of nursing care, I think of changing beds, taking vital signs, giving medications, etc.
  • I don't think of education as nursing care - nurses don't normally educate their charges.
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It is awkward because when I think of nursing care, I think of changing beds, taking vital signs, giving medications, etc. I don't think of education as nursing care - nurses don't normally educate their charges.
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