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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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I received a memo on the analysis of the scenarios with regard to the LTD JUMMO and JSC BZS HOUSING loan restructuring project.

Hello!
I have few questions about the above sentence. Is it clear from the sentence that LTD JUMMO and JSC BZS are the borrowers and there is project drafted which examines different scenarios for the reconstruction of their loans.

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Anonymous I received a memo on the analysis of the scenarios with regard to the LTD JUMMO and JSC BZS HOUSING companies loan reconstructing project. It is vague. I have few questions about the above sentence.

  • Anonymous I received a memo on the analysis of the scenarios with regard to the LTD JUMMO and JSC BZS HOUSING companies loan reconstructing project.
  • It is vague.
  • I have few questions about the above sentence.
  • Is it clear from the sentence that LTD JUMMO and JSC BZS are the borrowers ?
  • No and there is a project drafted examining different scenarios for the reconstruction of their loans.
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Anonymous I received a memo on the analysis of the scenarios with regard to the LTD JUMMO and JSC BZS HOUSING companies loan reconstructing project. It is vague.
Hello!I have few questions about the above sentence.
Is it clear from the sentence that LTD
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any suggestions how to rephrase it? I would be truly thankful!
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I would write it as follows;
I received a report on the refinancing options available for LTD JUMMO's and JSC BZS's housing loans.

Hamid

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