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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Tread me to death
The following paragraph is fictional. Would anyone be kind enough to correct the errors for me? Thanks!
Today, the wind invited me to travel with it. It took me to board a big ship. The ship was leaving for Europe. There were more than 300 passengers here. I was afraid that the throng of people might tread me to death. Thankfully, a cute dog picked me up and guided me to stroll around the ship. First, we went to the swimming pool, where it was crowded with dabblers having a frolic. Then we visited the restaurant, which was tastefully furnished with modern furniture. Next, we came to the health club, where it was full of people doing body-building exercise. This travel was the greatest traveling experience in my life. I was grateful to the wind that served as my tour guide.
Today, the wind invited me to travel with it. It took me to board a big ship. The ship was leaving for Europe. There were more than 300 passengers here. I was afraid that the throng of people might tread me to death. Thankfully, a cute dog picked me up and guided me to stroll around the ship. First, we went to the swimming pool, where it was crowded with dabblers having a frolic. Then we visited the restaurant, which was tastefully furnished with modern furniture. Next, we came to the health club, where it was full of people doing body-building exercise. This travel was the greatest traveling experience in my life. I was grateful to the wind that served as my tour guide.
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its very nice i like it i will give it to the teacher to make it a project
- its very nice i like it i will give it to the teacher to make it a project
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its very nice i like it i will give it to the teacher to make it a project
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its nice to correct the one who made this paragraph is handsome iam in college and i like to to stories and paragraph and iam the best in the college so you are good to make paragraph and like you made the paragraph you will do stories
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However, there are some errors in the paragraph. Someone has corrected the errors and I rewrote the paragraph as following.
Today, the wind invited me to travel with it. It took me onboard a big ship, which was leaving forEurope. There were more than 300 passengers. I was afraid that the throng of people might tread me to death. Thankfully, a cute dog picked me up and guided me on a
Today, the wind invited me to travel with it. It took me onboard a big ship, which was leaving forEurope. There were more than 300 passengers. I was afraid that the throng of people might tread me to death. Thankfully, a cute dog picked me up and guided me on a
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