traveling scandal

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Is the word "scandal" in the sentence  acceptable?Moreover, there is another scandal of Taiwanese tourists while traveling in Japan.

CalifJim · Accepted Answer

contiluoMoreover, there is another scandal involving Taiwanese tourists in Japan.

As shown above. 'scandal' is OK, but the rest of the sentence needed some changes.

CJ

Contiluo · Answer

What is the better expression of the quoted sentence followed by the paragraph below?

“Moreover, there is another scandal of Taiwanese tourists while traveling in Japan. The story is as following:”

A well-known eel kabayaki restaurant… However, a netizen posted a message on PTT saying that the other day he made a telephone call from Taiwan to Unagiya Hirokawa in Kyoto, reserving a table for the next evening. Unexpectedly, the waiter refused to take his reservation, complaining that Taiwanese tourists who made reservations often did not show up.

CalifJim · Answer

contiluoWhat is the better expression of the quoted sentence followed by the paragraph below?

What is the better expression? requires two expressions to choose between, and you gave only one quoted passage.

I think you wanted to ask What is a better expression?

I already gave you a better version of the first part. See my post above.

The second part The story is as following: should be changed to The story is as follows:

CJ

Contiluo · Answer

I rewrote the part as written:

Moreover, there is another scandal of Taiwanese tourists while traveling in Japan. The story is as follows:
A well-known eel kabayaki restaurant… However, a netizen posted a message on PTT saying that the other day he made a telephone call from Taiwan to Unagiya Hirokawa in Kyoto, reserving a table for the next evening. Unexpectedly, the waiter refused to take his reservation, complaining that Taiwanese tourists who made reservations often did not show up.

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