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Dung Nguyen 9484 Posted 8 years ago
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Travel to Japan in 24 hours

If i could travel to any country in the world jn one day, i would go yo Japan. Japan is a country with a variety of traditional culture anh no less interesting. Moreover, yhe poetic landscape of this country makes visitors who come from everywhere in the world fascinated. Fristly, if i travel to Japan, i will come to the Fuji mountain, enjoy the atmosphere and contemplate those pristine petals flying in the morning breeze. Secondly, i will come to Tokyo. I want to see how bustling this city is. Finally, i will come to a traditional Japan house, weak the Kimono and talk to local people beside a aromatic tea. I have a interesting day become a Japanese.

  

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You have to be more careful when typing. You have quite a few errors in your paragraph. You have hn for in; yo for to; anh for and; yhe for the .

  • You have to be more careful when typing.
  • You have quite a few errors in your paragraph.
  • You have hn for in; yo for to; anh for and; yhe for the .
  • You also have to remember to capitalize the word I whenever you use it.
  • Here's another version of your text that is a little better: If I could travel to any country in the world in one day, I would go to Japan.
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You have to be more careful when typing. You have quite a few errors in your paragraph. You have hn for in; yo for to; anh for and; yhe for the. You also have to remember to capitalize the word I whenever you use it.

Here's another version of your text that is a little better:

If I could travel to any country

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